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Friday, October 30, 2020

What if Palpatine entered Ben's body in the final fight against Rey? (A Rosie's Revisions Essay)

What if the climax of Rise of The Skywalker ended with Rey and Ben killing Cloned Palpatine, but then his spirit enters Ben?


All of the Jedi have joined Rey to summon the power of the Light Side to vanquish Palpatine...destroying his last cloned body in the process.  But Palpatine's spirit latches onto Ben in a desperate attempt to cling to consciousness.

Rey and Ben-patine fight...as Ben's internal struggle continues.  But this is the struggle he's been preparing himself for a lifetime.  He momentarily regains control of his body.  He tells her she must kill him while he is in control so his spirit will be bound with Palpatine's in The Force...and once his life of crude matter ends, he will bind Palpatine with him in the the madness and choas of the Dark Force spiritual maelstrom...forever vanquished.  He realizes this may be an eternity of anguish for him, too, but it is a sacrifice he's willing to make.

Rey says she can't do it.  He says she must hurry...it is taking all of his Light to hold Palpatine at bay.  The spirits of Luke, Leia and Anakin appear and enter Ben's body to give him enough strength to hold Palpatine within.  Ben's body begins to struggle a bit less as a calmness starts to fill him.  But the strain is still clear.

Rey cries out that still can't do it.  Ben says she must.  He tells her it is the only way to bring balance to the Force.  

He says, I'm being torn apart. I want to be free of this pain.  With tears, pouring down her face, she tells Ben, "I know what I have to do, but I don't know if I have the strength to do it.  Will you help me?"

Ben composes himself solidly, stands up proudly, leans forward and gently kisses her. "Anything."

Rey presses Anakin Skywalker's lightsaber to his chest and he wraps his trembling hands over hers.  He says, "I love you."  She says, "I know, and I love you, too."

They both breathe deeply...both begin glowing with the Light...and together ignite the blade.  His eyes go wide and then his face is flooded with peace as his body slumps to the ground, Rey holding him in her arms as they both collapse to the ground.  The pulsing glow rises from his body.  Rey holds him as she gazes at the spectacle. It begins to separate into five distinct focii of energy.

As the energy takes more familiar shapes, at the center, two glowing forms begin to circle one another...a red form and blue form swirling entity becomes recognizable as the writhing spirit of Palpatine wrapped in a struggle with Ben.

Surrounding them is a triangle with Anakin floating above and Luke and Leia forming the base below.  All three reach out towards the center, pulling them apart.  Palpatine flails with rage and anguish.  Anakin pulls Palpatine upwards and the two merge into one until they dissolve into nothingness...balance finally restored to The Force.  

Luke and Leia pull Ben's spirit down towards his body with Rey, still in tears holding him.  As his spirit re-enters his body, Luke and Leia surround the body with the glowing warmth of The Light Side and Ben awakens with a gasp of breath.

Luke and Leia start to fade peacefully into The Light, both looking content.  He says to them, "Pass on what you have learned.  The Force will be with you." And as Leia fades, she tells them, "We will always be a part of you as long as you have hope."

And then, together, Rey and Ben Solo rise to begin their destiny...together.

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(A critical acknowledgement...


...this was inspired from key events in the legendary 1995 Empire's End comic, written by Tom Veitch and Mike Beidler produced by Dark Horse comics.  In Veitch's saga starting with the 1991 Dark Empire series (set 6 years after the destruction of the 2nd Death Star), he and Cam Kennedy introduced to the Star Wars narrative that while Luke was recruiting Force sensitive survivors of The Dark Times, the Emperor's dark spirit, which had been ripped from its decaying form by Anakin Skywalker on the second Death Star, re-animated itself in one of the many waiting clones of himself.  

Eventually, Luke confronts Palpatine and destroys the other clone bodies.  Palpatine is shot and killed by Han Solo. As his final clone body dies, he declares his intention to embody Anakin Solo, Leia and Han's youngest child.  But before he can transfer his evil essence one more time, one of Luke's apprentices who was mortally wounded in the fight uses the Force to bind Palpatine's spirit with his own.  He forces Palpatine to spend eternity swirling in the madness and choas of The Dark Side even though he would share that same fate...a sacrifice he's willing to make to rid the Galaxy of Emperor Palpatine once and for all.)



Monday, September 28, 2020

The following is inspired by the leaked script from Colin Trevarrow's treatment for Star Wars Episode 9, which would have been called, "Duel of Fates".  In it, the first act involves our heros, Rey, Finn, Poe, Rose and BB-8 infiltrating Coruscant to disable a galactic jamming device, which explains why no one responded to Leia's call for help at the end of Episode 8. That got me thinking that it would have been interesting if this infiltration had been not to destroy the jammer, but to enter the ruins of the Jedi Temple to modify the Jedi emergency frequency beacon highlighted in Episode 3 to transmit one last transmission from Leia...a final plea for help in the Galaxy's most desperate hour. I can imagine what was meant to be a covert mission to be in and out with no one noticing to something going wrong and the Falcon and our friend being discovered and chased to the surface. On the surface, they blast their way through First Order defenses at the temple and just in the nick of time send the following transmission for the entire civilized Galacy to see:
For those of you who do not know me, I am General Leia Organa Solo. Years ago I served your parents in the fight to restore freedom to our Galaxy. Now I beg of you to help us now in our struggle against the First Order's vile obsession with returning us to those Dark Times. I regret that I am unable to present my request to you in person, but the Resistance has fallen under attack, and I’m afraid my mission to keep our Republic is at it's breaking point. I have embedded information vital to the survival of the Resitance into this transmission. You, my fellow Rebels and Resistors will know how to retrieve it. And for those of you who are new to our cause, never forget that you are not alone. Fear will only win if we stay divided. I have faith in you all. This is our most desperate hour. Help me, citizens of our Galaxy. You’re our only hope. The Force will be with us...always.

Saturday, January 27, 2018

Phasma Fleshed Out in Ep. 7 & 8 and more (A Rosie's Revision Essay)


Gwendoline Christie is great!  
Captain Phasma is great!  

I love the look and attitude of the Phasma.  I can feel a dark mirror of Brienne of Tarth oozing out of Christie's delightful performances.  But I do not believe that Phasma's portrayal in The Force Awakens or in The Last Jedi gave her enough to allow her to live up to her potential.  It did not allow us to witness the amazing acting and physical talents of Gwendoline Christie.

Don't get me wrong...when Phasma was on screen, she was just fine.  No major complaints.  I just wanted more of her.  And I don't just mean a more epic and longer fight scene (which would have been nice).  I wanted her story to be more substantial, especially, as it relates to her being a foil and motivator in Finn's Hero's Journey

So, I figured out how Phasma’s story could have been fleshed out a bit more with a small tweak to the story in The Last Jedi which would change her entire character in very interesting ways.

[WARNING: SPOILERS for the films, The Force Awakens and The Last Jedi, movie, the novel, Phasma and the comic series, Captain Phasma] 

Ok...imagine The Last Jedi revised so that Phasma replaced DJ in the role of the splicer found on Canto Bight. (Sorry, Mr. del Toro...you and your character were fantastic, but I guess you’d have to wait until Ep. 9 to join the cast.) Imagine in a dark Canto Bight jail cell, Finn and Rose find themselves locked in with Phasma (who they don’t recognize without her mask) and return with HER to Snoke’s ship instead of DJ, the slicer.

{I know it sounds completely random, but, trust me...this is just a part of the epic villainous journey that I think she deserves.}



But how would she have ended up in a dingy jail cell on Canto Bight? It all starts in a trash compactor on the doomed Starkiller Base. What if instead of covering her tracks and returning to her position of prestige, she was forced to flee, in disgrace, out of self-preservation before her cowardly betrayal was, inevitably, discovered by The First Order?

First, we need to go back even further to think about how she was introduced in the film, The Force Awakens. She is presented as a ruthless leader shrouded in mystery and discipline. She submits to orders from her superiors, even massacring defenseless prisoners, adheres to strict procedures, demands unwavering loyalty and inspires her underlings to constantly be striving for superior skills. And she appears to be completely devoted to The First Order.

After she lowers the defenses on Starkiller Base, the greatest weapon the galaxy has ever known, she states that she does not see this as a threat to The First Order, since she is so confident in the skills and loyalty of her troops that she knows that they’ll be able to restore the shields before the pathetic Resistance fighters can do any harm.

Or so she claims. But what if there was another explanation for her actions? What if she was willfully acting against the First Order, as I said...out a simple self-preservation. In the novel Phasma by Delilah Dawson, by exploring her past, we learn of an even darker side than even the sinister faceless evil. We meet a survivor who will stop at nothing if it means improving her chances of survival.

If after The Force Awakens, Phasma had fled Starkiller Base, she could have gone into hiding, starting a new life incognito without her chrome mask. Remember...no one, except possibly Hux, knows her face.

And where would she end up? No one that she knows from her home planet survived, not that she’d go back to that desolate existence regardless. And she knows no one in the Galaxy outside of The First Order. So, she seeks out the only people in the galaxy she has any contact with...the weapon suppliers...the war profiteers. She knows that with their financial influence, they are even more powerful than the First Order...which leads her to Canto Bight. Out a desperation, she hopes to leverage her inner knowledge of The First Order and it’s inner dealings into a position of power. But with no social skills and no real direct contacts, she finds herself unable to make any meaningful connections and ends up discarded on the streets. Poor, alone and seemingly defenseless, she gets caught fighting and ends up in jail, perhaps after killing an attempted mugger or worse.

She ends in a cell thinking herself truly lost and helpless...until who gets thrown in but FN-2187 and some naive Resistance Scum. With a new purpose, she intends to win back favor with The First Order, the only family she’s ever thrived in, by helping to bring their greatest traitor back for vengeance. Perhaps she has visions of falsely claiming it was he who was responsible for their defeat at Starkiller Base.

Finn, of course, has no idea who she is, so, after he and Rose free the faziers, they gladly accept her offer of a ride off Canto Bight with BB-8. Phasma, knowing the codes to enter Snoke’s ship, will lead them both to their doom. But on the journey back, Finn and the unmasked Phasma debate which side is good, which is evil and what lies in the self-preserving gray in the middle.  This would be a similar discussion to what was in the film between Finn and DJ.  The possibilities of this alternate scene between Boyega and Christie seem to be a fountain of dramatic potential.

It is only after she gets them back into her clutches on Snoke’s Star Destroyer does she call him FN-2147 as she alerts the guards to their presence. The next time we see her she has donned her chrome.

The rest of the movie pretty much goes the same. I just think that there was a really interesting missed opportunity if they had given Phasma a more substantial story arc plus a chance to interact with Finn in a fresh new ways. More importantly, the amazing Gwendolyn Christie would have a chance to act in really dramatic scenes who would no longer just give the sense of her talent, but would demonstrate her brilliance.

Friday, April 21, 2017

Mulan: The Later Years

53-year-old Ming-Na Wen joked that maybe she’d reprise her role as the warrior in a live-action sequel, “if it was ‘Mulan: The Later Years.”
FINALLY! A Disney Sequel I'd love to watch!

Friday, April 14, 2017

Star Wars: Episode 8: The Last Jedi (Teaser from SWCO)


Luke: "Breathe.
Just breathe.
Now, reach out.
What do ya' see?"

"(Leia: You're my only hope.) Rey: Light.
(Obi-Wan: Seduced by the Dark Side) Rey: Darkness.
(Yoda: Surrounds us, and binds us.) Rey: The Balance"

Luke: "It's so much bigger.

I only know one truth.
It's time for the Jedi...
...to end."


Thursday, April 13, 2017

Coming Attractions - The Saga Continues...

With the Star Wars saga alive and well,
we have lots of wonderful teasers and trailers
to help us build our anticipation of where we'll go next
in a galaxy far, far away.

Before we move forward,
I'd like to go back a moment
to remember from where we came
on this wonderful journey.

So, get your speakers on
and your mouse ready to click on full screen,
because...

It's 1976!!!

Coming soon...to a galaxy near you!!!  

Star Wars!!!

A Boy, A Girl and A Universe!!

Star Wars (1976) (Early Teaser)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fltqa5i03M4


Friday, March 10, 2017

A Few Good Scientists

JESSEP You want scientific answers? 
KAFFEE I think I'm entitled to them. 
JESSEP You want published results and conclusions?! 
KAFFEE I WANT THE TRUTH!
JESSEP YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE TRUTH!!
Son, we live in a universe that has natural laws. And those laws have to be discovered by scientists with perseverance and brains. Who's gonna do it? You? You, Lt. Weinberg? I have a greater responsibility than you can possibly fathom.